Reviews for Eden |
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![]() ![]() ![]() GOD. Favorites. :) Cheers, doxology |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey sinewwy sup. anyway I like this because it just feels so...sad. like you don't even bother with punctuation because you're too sad. I like that you're able to get that feeling in your poems. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would suggest putting some puncuation in this. The ideas seem a little mixed up, but I like the general idea. Nice. Rowan. (hayleysfriend from Neopets) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sinewy. I liked dis. It was rly good. Lolz sry I can't rly think of anything constructive right now. Scared to brain dead stuff lolz you know why x-x... ily:* ~Frodo |