Nice. Pranks are always the best things in life.

-Kat

Very cute, right in time for the holidays!

r-w

I love to play the lets-predict-life-stories-about-random-people-in-the-mall game! I was actually playing it last night D. This chapter was really funny. It made me giggle ). Are we gonna see more interaction between Anna and James? That'd be nice D. Couple spelling errors, I'm sure they were just twists of the fingers. Waiting anxiously for the next chapter!

-Jackie

Ha ha ha! Love this!

Haha, this one had me laughing ] Please update soon!

hey this story is good can't wait to read more

:D i love it.

Write more soon!

Kellie

Ooh! Sounds cool! Update soon!

This seems really cute! I'm excited to read the next chapter - keep writing!

-Jackie

Good story so far. Im definately interested and will keep on reading. Update soon!

Nice story, I can't wait to read more of it, but one question. If Anna will like her sister's fiance little brother won't they be somehow related? Idk, sometimes it confuses me and don't even ask why lol

UPDATE SOON!

Really funny! I like your style. You've got a few spelling errors, but I think it'd be useless to point them out (a writer's style doesn't depend on the skill of a spellchecker, just like this review, I'm sure). This reminds me of some of my parodic and satirical stuff I've written. Of course, lately I've been all about dark sonnets, etc., so this was a very refreshing read. I hope there's more to it, but if not, your ending is really abrupt. But there seems like there'll be more. Thanks for writing.

J

Keep writing, I'll keep reading!

I like the story so far, update soon!