Reviews for Of Disillusions
C.F. Anne chapter 2 . 12/17/2006
so sad! how could Yazdan do that to her? anyway love the way you wrote this chapter and all the descriptions. update soon! (:
Kohlomere chapter 2 . 12/17/2006
Oh...I'm so sorry for Sarita! I never expected her to go on the rebound with Omar. You did a great job, E.
Bentfender chapter 2 . 12/17/2006
Yeah! I'm glad she slept with Omar.

One suggestion, try to avoid phrasing things like "my soft feet padded through the hallway". It makes for weird reading and it's a little vain because it's 1st person. If that makes sense at all.

But I like it. Update soon!
Wings As Eagles chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
wow...good beginning. I feel sorry for Sarita...I am also wondering if she will take a lover to see if she can make the king jealous (since you DID mention some soldiers that do like her ;) It's good to see you back and writing again, girl! Do you think you will ever finish "Remember The Alamo"?
Bentfender chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
Wow. That sucks for Sarita. I hope she has an affair with Omar :P.
Kohlomere chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
That was fantastic! Sarita is precious-vain perhaps, but a gem! Keep up the good work, E.
C.F. Anne chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
I feel so sorry for Sarita! :( but it is very good and well written...:) i look forward to the rest of the story.
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