Reviews for Roller Coaster Passions
puppymobile chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Aw, man. You really got just how it feels to be on a rollercoaster, and you put it down on paper. How do you do that?
Carmel March chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
That was absolutely wonderful. It seemed that I was right there, looking out, waiting for that weightless feeling. Good job on this!

~carm~
ShadowFane chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
I love roller coasters...as long as they don't go upside down in ANY form or fashion...I'm a bit of a chicken. ;D Anyway, love this. Wonderful piece!

SF
MadMaverick chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
I don't think this sounds like suicide at all! I'd take that out of the description - you don't want people reading it with preconceptions. It's way too upbeat at the end, and doesn't have any self pity involved.

I'm glad you didn't try to rhyme this either - the word choice was done really well. Plus the short lines alternated with the long give it a swoopy rhythm - very roller-coastery.