|Reviews for Ashen Amber|
| Tam Cutter chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Woah. This is so awesome. I love wolves so that helps. It is very well written. If you dont mind I would like to print this off and show it to some of my friends.
| salafrae chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
paints a really neat picture.
| Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Oh now this has flow, this has rhythm, this doesn't even need punctuation. Color me freaking impressed.
But I will complain over the inconsistent use of "and" vs. "&". Use one or the either consistently please? Thank you.
The bond they share now
Cannot be surpassed
While that does contribute to your awesome flow it feels slightly trite.
Otherwise, very much enjoying this piece.