Reviews for Jaded
E. W. Chai chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Food for though.

I feel as though it was for personalities that NEED to know there's something better - that religion was first created. For a pathological need of ultimate consquences.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
I wish you would have continued this.

I mean, the first few lines are almost breaktaking if that doesn't sound too weird, but then it seems like you were just content with that and let your emotions get the better of you and ended it like it's so easy to do.

I don't know. I just think it could be more.

But it's beautiful.

Thanks. Sara.
EngineerMK chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
I know that feeling. Great stuf, keep up the writing.

-EngineerMK
tuieri chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
i'm sorry, i can't.