Reviews for Little Dot
Twilight Starr chapter 2 . 3/19/2008
Great addition. Nice work.

Twilight Starr
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Great job on description. It's sad. My favorite part is "beauty of the blade". Nice work.

Twilight Starr
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
Very descripitive, I like that. I also like how you describe cutting in an aesthetically pleasing way (not saying that I cut but it's a nice way to write about it) It's a nice repetition going on too.
kathleen30263 chapter 2 . 12/13/2006
Is Teddy Bear around?
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
Hate the topic. Good writing. Sad subject.
Ryumaru shogunate chapter 2 . 12/11/2006
Excellent! I love it! Keep it up!
Ryumaru shogunate chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
Beautiful reference to the wonder that is blood! And of course a blood stained blade! The second chapter is a revision? Coll I'll check it out!
Honor Bound chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
odd piece. i hope you dont actually mutilate yourself. but, i liked the line of shimmer in the light, great red and silver. very nice. oh, btw, you should change your word fropm perticular to particular. peace