|Reviews for A Prayer|
| bukangliwayway chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
hidden desires, eh?
i totally feel the same!...*blushes*
minor errors, though:
-For.. to listen 'to' my pr'yer? ('to' instead of 'for' since the request is directed to and not taken from)
i like the dramatic situation situated in the poem..
Perhaps, in psychoanalysis, one could fish out more than one emotion that the writer intended..:)