Reviews for Samantha
jewelup429 chapter 3 . 1/15/2007
wow this is really good also!

cant wait for the next chapter!
roalwand chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
I love how you catch the reader's attention by making the first few paragraphs interesting and catching me off guard.

The sentense: At the moment, Kristopher sat with a mixed couple and another girl. is kind of confusing within the context of the paragraph. I would expound this sentence a little more maybe... a couple consisting of a vampire and a human or a boy and a girl or whatever you are trying to say.