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   Nokturnal Augury chapter 2 . 12/12/2006 O.o wo Really nice. Love the "Je deteste" in her inner dialogue. The fact that you stated it in another language makes it stick out and gives it a touch of sarcasm while it is something everybody understands. The mousy lines rocked. Love the way you paint her character with only the few lines she speaks, a couple of movements - and inner dialogue that isn't too short or too abundant. Sweetness The ending kicked ass too. |
| happens-all-the-time chapter 2 . 12/12/2006 i eally like this so far! please update soon! and also a little longer chapters ould be nice] bye4now! ] |