|Reviews for Paradise Parasite WORKING TITLE|
| Nokturnal Augury chapter 2 . 12/12/2006
Really nice. Love the "Je deteste" in her inner dialogue. The fact that you stated it in another language makes it stick out and gives it a touch of sarcasm while it is something everybody understands.
The mousy lines rocked. Love the way you paint her character with only the few lines she speaks, a couple of movements - and inner dialogue that isn't too short or too abundant. Sweetness
The ending kicked ass too.
| happens-all-the-time chapter 2 . 12/12/2006
i eally like this so far! please update soon! and also a little longer chapters ould be nice]