This was a really beautiful story. It was not to long and not to short. It made me cry and i think it probably made you cry when you rote it. I think it would be nice if you didnt finish it because it would ruin the story! Keep riting u r great at it.

That almost brought tears to my eyes. Short and sweet, but really sad too. I loved it. n_n

It would have been easier to read if you'd split it into paragraphs, though.

- Animeniac