Reviews for Humanity, Obliviouse to the Fact
meaninglessTears chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
heh i do agree with the poem. u're right. very good idea and very good poem. keep writing!
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Towards the end the rhythm was pretty off but the poem is simple but interesting
HgBookworm chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
Well done, Smartone. I love how this poem describes the irony of the human race- how no matter how backwards everything may seem at times, we are somehow moving forward. Excellent job... Keep that pen moving...

Doc Blood chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
It also makes us human, this ability to act in ways that are contrary to our inner, base feelings and desires. We can rise above them. Well done.

Peace, Doc