|Reviews for Humanity, Obliviouse to the Fact|
| meaninglessTears chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
heh i do agree with the poem. u're right. very good idea and very good poem. keep writing!
| tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Towards the end the rhythm was pretty off but the poem is simple but interesting
| HgBookworm chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
Well done, Smartone. I love how this poem describes the irony of the human race- how no matter how backwards everything may seem at times, we are somehow moving forward. Excellent job... Keep that pen moving...
| Doc Blood chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
It also makes us human, this ability to act in ways that are contrary to our inner, base feelings and desires. We can rise above them. Well done.