Reviews for Cold Fire
urbanfictionalist chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
i really enjoyed this i cant wait for the next chapter. its sad tho i hope it gets better. keep writing ur really good
unrequitedx chapter 3 . 12/14/2006
I never meant to make it sound offending! :(

Sorry.. :D..

But thanks for updating so fast!

I can just imagine how beautiful they both are. :)
unrequitedx chapter 2 . 12/13/2006
Jacob Verado Giordi Danilo Principio...

Nice... very.. err...

Italian like. o.O;

lol, overall I like where this story's going.

Update when you can! :D
Griezula chapter 2 . 12/13/2006
I LOVE medieval-like era stories! :D I haven't found very many, but that could just be me... o_o But whatever! This is very promising and I can't wait for more! :3
Disconnecktie chapter 2 . 12/13/2006
Aye aye! I'll have a story alert set for this. Great story so far! Kimran is noble, but it makes me sad. I like the characters so far, but the Prince scares me X_X.

Whe keep it up D
Ally-Kat722 chapter 2 . 12/13/2006
Really good. I like this idea a lot, and I'd like to read more. It's very descriptive and has no errors that I've seen yet. (Though I wasn't reading for them, so don't quote me on that. ) Keep up the excellent work, and you'll make one happy reviewer. :D (Happy reviewers more reviews happy authors/authoresses more chapters happy reviewers. The happy writing circle.)

Good luck!

I can't wait for an update!
UnOriginal chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
intresting story ... can't wait for more

poOr Kim

TehRandomPerson chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
Your story looks as though it will be very interesting, and I can't wait for the next chapter.(Please don't wait too long.)

Anyways, there was one part in your story that didn't make sense.

"There was a long silence so overwhelming that Kimran could swear that the man could his rapidly beating hearty that hammered in his"

I think you forgot the word hear.
Sinor chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
This is definitely interesting, and I'll be waiting to read more! ...WRITE QUICKLY AND UPDATE SOON! XD Now that my little rant is over...

It was pretty good, but one thing I noticed that kind of bugged me was when Kimran gave the last look to his sister. I'm not sure it's possible to have that many emotions go through a single look, but you don't have to change it. Just thought I'd mention it.
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