Reviews for Cold Fire
kirarin242 chapter 12 . 3/15/2008
kirarin242 chapter 11 . 3/15/2008
really good boring at the end tho...-_-
kirarin242 chapter 10 . 3/15/2008
um...Yay! XD :)!
kirarin242 chapter 9 . 3/15/2008
aw cute he said sorry :3
kirarin242 chapter 8 . 3/15/2008
that was so sad sorry i could not write for the other few chapters heh i was so into the story !
kirarin242 chapter 4 . 3/15/2008
lol Really good!
kirarin242 chapter 3 . 3/15/2008
really good :)!
kirarin242 chapter 2 . 3/15/2008
can u make the chapters a little longer i still love this story so far tho :3! XD!
kirarin242 chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
aww that's os sad :(
Back of Beyond chapter 23 . 2/18/2008
Nice story - hope you update soon!
Awsome17 chapter 23 . 1/3/2008
This is really good! Kim kinda reminds me of my own character Andy...except Andy is a little more niaive. And Jake reminds me of my character Lance. Although Lance is always nice and kind except to those who he thinks could or would hurt Andy. And Leroy he is like my character Vince Callaway. He is evil and sadistic. He will do everything in his power to make things go his way. I like this story alot. Hell our stories are even in the same time era I think...Medievil era? Update son!
Zephyr Tenshi chapter 23 . 12/22/2007
This story is absolutely beautiful! The characters and their emotions are incredibly rich and entirely human. You have done an amazing job with this so far! I have been enthralled with this, to the point that I should have been in bed hours ago so that I can get up for work in the morning, but I was not able to put this up until I had read every word. I do so look forward to reading more of this story! Bravisima and chao for now darling!
red-headed psychopaths wanted chapter 23 . 12/21/2007
Dude you nearly made me cry!


Great chapter...I'll die if you don't update soon!

kiki chapter 23 . 12/20/2007
please update and hopefully, Leroy will be cured of his madness.
urbanfictionalist chapter 23 . 12/20/2007
yay your back i enjoyed the chapter i do wish it was a bit longer though i cant wait for the next chapter
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