|Reviews for Another|
| 017Bluefield chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
"The many ways 'another' is applied." Or, something like that, I guess.
Anyway, good job. :-]
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
Wow. Brilliant ending. Your poem is excellent.
Just one little suggestion: the line "Another gloomy, sad night" felt like it needed another syllable or two... But it's minor.
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
I like the rhyme scheme. I also like how the word "another" can be used to say so much. Nicely done!
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
It just goes so fast. I mean, so many things are happening, you can't even understand everything you are feeling. Sorry, that was kind of a weird way of putting it. Maybe I'm a little tired...hehe. Well, great job! God bless!
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
Simple yet effective. Cool rhythm! Greatness! Keep writing! :)