Reviews for Fool's Dance
Unnie chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
Beautiful.
greenGalilee chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
I like the phrase "this fool's dance of mine." The main comparison in this poem is pretty good.

Good job.
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
This is actually pretty brilliant. I love how the whole thing is symbolic of life (or at least that's what I think it's about, it's good that you keep the topic un-obvious). Has good rhythm and figurative language.
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
Aw. I love this piece. I totally understand and relate to this. D I can't dance for my life!

Rowan.
SirScott chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
I never was good at dancing, so I liked this poem.

SirScott
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
This is really cool. I adore the way you've written it. :) Write on!

Anna _