|Reviews for Suicide Simplistic|
| 000000000 chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
The rhymes sounded pretty natural. Very cool poem. Applies to modern society a lot. Well done.
| tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
The last lines were really good but the poem overall isn't too strong. The emotion wasn't that, well, present. The rhyme was pretty forced.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
This is a for sure about today's world...
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
That was sad. I felt sorry for the girl.
| sirskipsalot chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
This poem depicts something very real and true in today's society. Nicely done.
| LightfootLee chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
hey that last line was pretty cool, and the rhymes didn't seem as forced as most aabb type poems do. good job