Reviews for Suicide Simplistic
000000000 chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
The rhymes sounded pretty natural. Very cool poem. Applies to modern society a lot. Well done.
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
The last lines were really good but the poem overall isn't too strong. The emotion wasn't that, well, present. The rhyme was pretty forced.
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
This is a for sure about today's world...

Sir Scott chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
That was sad. I felt sorry for the girl.

sirskipsalot chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
This poem depicts something very real and true in today's society. Nicely done.
LightfootLee chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
hey that last line was pretty cool, and the rhymes didn't seem as forced as most aabb type poems do. good job