|Reviews for White Flowers Blooming In The Mud|
| Baobei.13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
This one is good too!
| Technical-Difficulties chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
not the cheery sort...i do love the mood of the poem... though i shouldnt because it's basically saying that we'll all become fertilizer. and it certainly doesnt potray anythig in a positive light
| MrFlames chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
What really makes this poem are the three lines:
"when you die, your body becomes fertilizer for
beautiful white flowers that will be
crushed underneath the boots of soldiers,"
You really hit a rhythm right there, combined with strong imagery. The first two sentences (from "Everyone is good..." to "...people around you") isn't terrible, but isn't really great.
This is a nice short piece, with a mild opening that is saved by a few good lines at the end. Well done.
| Travis C. Eckert chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
Wow, what a great explanation of the circle of life.
| spiked punch after midnight chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
This is fantastic.