Reviews for I'm Tired
HitchSlap chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
Beautiful. A lot of this definitely applies to me, and anyone whose slowly burning out with day-to-day routine. We fear change enough that we choose to stay miserable. This poem speaks out against that, and I love it.
The Ghost Drowned chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
The rhyming was great, the flow was wonderful, and I absolutely loved it. It radiated exhaustion that I know everyday. The format was a bit difficult to read, but other than that, brilliant.