|Reviews for this is why|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
This is a great little piece of characterization. I love list pieces like this. My favorite bit of this was probably the most specific part: "she's the kind of girl who's going to name her dog lou/when she gets older/just so she can call him loudly in her backyard." That's just so fantastic. I love that little detail. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
| in a jar pk chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
omg, it's me. XD
| polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
"and she'll forget your name
but remember what bands you listen to"
im not sure why, but those two lines just hit me as being fantastic. the last two lines are gorgeous as well.
& i like the summary with this as well...mysterious in a lovely way. ~Bex xx