|Reviews for Captain Skyler|
| Tainted Blood Lust chapter 10 . 2/21/2007
sorry for the late review...damn school ::shakes fist:: the reason for the split up betas sounds like a childish argument (is not! is too! is not! is too!) lol and Ace is so clueless! but then again he WAS a poor farmer person slave...I guess I have nothing more to say so as always...please write more soon 3
| Rubadub chapter 10 . 2/18/2007
I think I'm going to add it/you to my faves/alerts if you don't mind. I'd also have to say that Chase is by far my fave character... his personality is so lively and fun.
Take it easy,
| crane chapter 9 . 2/14/2007
Heh, I'm really mentally exhausted right now; I would review more completely, had I the mental faculty. I promise I'll write a more comprehensive review tomorrow after I've gotten some sleep, but let me tell you, I find myself hard-pressed to find good sci-fi slash that doesn't die mid-chapter just before the climax of the story. I mean, you did warn us that you hoped that wouldn't happen, but a good portion of the time when you stumble across a story that happens to die, you don't usually feel at too terrible a loss.
On that note, however, I'd just like to give you a big huge thumbs up: encouragement to keep you afloat and writing this. I love the smatterings of sci-fi terminology that actually mean things, I love the use of plants and animals ship-side for resources, I love the idea of Betas. You have a strong skill with exposition and spreading it out over a good enough plot-surface-area that it's not overwhelming. You give the reader what they need, and even use terminology which is apparently self-evident to any normal person in the setting. Awesome job on that front.
Under any more coherent circumstance, I swear to you I'd be more comprehensive and offer you some actual criticisms, but I can't think of anything at the moment. I'll look the story over again later to see if I can offer something useful for you, but you have such a good handle on the word as it stands that I don't know that anything I'd have to say would do you any good...
I guess, in conclusion, I'll just say that you have a style of just the right level of maturity, I find. Not too heavy-handed, because a good portion of the time you're being lighthearted for one reason or another; but you use a weight that allows the plot to actually have bearing. Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this reading and that I think it would be a great thing for you to continue the story through to its completion.
| Tainted Blood Lust chapter 9 . 2/14/2007
wow...Eph? a whore? once again...wow...and whore-er stories ::laughs:: you seem to have more of an imagination then me! but then again there ARE the man-eating marshmellows (never can spell that)...anyhoozits hope to hear from you soon! 3
| asweetandtimelyjustice chapter 8 . 2/3/2007
I love the writing style, the characters, the backrounds, and your own personal conception of space... It's a lot like my story, except way way WAY less explicit. So yeah. I loved it, first thing on my favourites list. Huzzah! Oh! And read my story!
| Tainted Blood Lust chapter 8 . 2/3/2007
yay! the infamous Buddha got a username! anyways...I'm still here for y'all and your story...certainly sounds like a conversation with a relative (*laughs*) pwease writes mhores soon 3
| Buddha chapter 7 . 1/27/2007
yay! new chapter! *does happy dance* a fountain of Eph...wow that made me laugh so hard and I agree the chapter is a bit short but that's ok )
| Buddha chapter 6 . 1/24/2007
*german accent* ish good! anyways...um...I'm really having mental block at the moment so...please write more soon (I say that all the time I have GOT to find something else to say)
| cookieface chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
This story is god i luv it. Chase
| turtledonkey27 chapter 4 . 1/4/2007
this story is great! there should be a hell of a lot more reviews on it considering the quality. i'm liking the captain x eph relationship so far-very steamy! looking forward to seeing how it develops. need to go back and re-read the white coat/black coat thing because I'm confused as to which is which. keep up the excellent work!
| zzzzz chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
i like the story so far but i hope that ure not planning to get the kid an the captain together because 12 and and a 23 year old is a bit weird but if ure not then great first chapter :)