Reviews for Hollow
BalletManiac chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
I loved your poem. This is great work!

EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
I'll have to agree with my friend...this definitely feels familiar. This is a great piece, keep writing!
MusicalPhoenix chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
Hmm, I like this one. It works for you too. good work

~A Fellow Writer and Reader,

ShadowedTears chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
This reminds me of a friend of mine. She is on fiction press under the name of EyesEmphatic. Go check out her work if you get the chance, its really good :)
grant chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
a common feeling - no one knows whats going on inside
MarieJ173 chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
Appearance can be a deceptive thing. You described it well. I like this style of writing. Keep experimenting, it is how you grow as a writer.

Ravensbleeding chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
It's interesting. I can relate to it.