Reviews for grey
Valentine's Disease chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
you write wonderfully.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
Wow. This has amazing imagery. The story itself is well-fleshed, and then with the addition of all the details, it's really a fantastic piece of writing. You use such interesting phrases, too, like "the yellowing curve of burning books" and "tree bark curls." Just fabulous work. I do love it. Keep writing! :)
Maggot Blood chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
Great poem, alot of cool lines that make me smile and it was all around really good. Keep it up.

come one valentine chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
his lips crack into dusty gravelly lines, i am totally in lvoe with that line. in fact, i may have it's babies.

you are incredible.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
I like this, a lot. I don't know why. It is just so, appealing, the word phrasing I suppose. Wonderful job. I absolutely adore the first two lines. Great job.