Reviews for Thin Skinned
Universal Empire chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
I like how he smashes the carton in her face! I probably already reviewed this on Deviant Art but I'm not too sure. Either way this was really funny! Keep writing!
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
I'm sorry! I could've sworn I reviewed this... Anyway, I love it! GREAT JOB! Keep it up!
vampiric-happenings chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
this is spectacular! in a horrificly satisfying sort of way.

Well, for one,"-"Well, for one,"; you're not your in the last quotation.

this was well written! nice work! :D
xCorix chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
eerie... i'll get constructive: you're not your. (that ALWAYS bothers me so many people do it!)

i like it... in a creepy kinda way.