Reviews for Out of Luck
NyghtRayne chapter 10 . 4/30/2009
I have to tell you how much i loved this story, and im glad that even tho you were drunk when you started this, that you kept up with it till the end. It was literary genius, that ending. I was expecting to to end with 'I got Terry and all that jazz' but i really liked this ending. I hope you keep writing. and i wish there was more of a market for books like these because with this story you could make out rich. :D

wikus chapter 10 . 4/15/2009
I lol'd hard.

No, seriously. I had so much fun reading this story. It's funny and sexy, and that's good enough for me. Alex is a spoiled little brat and a slut too. I have lots of fun with him and I loved this end. And Dennis is awesome.

And the threesome. Yeah, that was good. Really good.

P.S.: this chapter made me lost The Game, you little fuc*er.
Poptart Guava King chapter 10 . 3/31/2009
That was amazing. I loved it, well written and yay for smex! Alec is quite interesting. Made me laugh, and cry, and ignore some papers that i had to write just to finish it. When i choose a fic over a know its a good fic! XD
Shriken chapter 10 . 3/28/2009
Wow...this is the hottest story I've read here, EVER!
JadesyWadesy chapter 10 . 3/27/2009
Amazing story :D I loved it. But I felt so bad for Alec and I would love to read more about him :D Terry is cool and so is Dennis :D Threesome :D

koerle chapter 10 . 3/18/2009
This story is hot, sweet, hot an also a little sad.

I have read it with pleasure... so thank you very much for the "ride".
xClutteredxChaosx chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
I loved this very much
HurtMe chapter 10 . 3/7/2009
I like this story. I like the way it's written, and that there wasn't this everybody saw it coming happy ending. In fact, I like it so much that I'm voting for it in the Some Kind of Wonderful awards (which is where I found it). Great job with this.
DestructiveEntity chapter 10 . 3/5/2009
What can I say, really? Brilliant. Simply brilliant.

Very well written, smart and funny. Just a pleasure to read.

I have to say, the ending made me kind of sad. Not so much because Alec didn't get Terry, but because he went back to his 'cruising' lifestyle. It was a nice way to end the story the same way it began, but sad nonetheless.

You did a fantastic job. *applauds and bows down*
Jazzz chapter 10 . 2/19/2009
Fuckin genius

Ur a great writer
bagussuryaperdana chapter 10 . 2/17/2009
you have absolutely no contact with us,, from the beginning to the end. so not care much?

yeah i loved your work though,it's awesome, make a sequel wouldn't you?

hugs ad kisses!
xxlnsomnia chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Ha, Alec is my new official favorite fictionpress character.

I laughed from beginning to end. If I weren't so in love with your writing I'd get revenge for almost causing me to go into cardiac arrest from laughing-overdose.

I think I've already said that I love your work?
rAiNwAtEr1 chapter 10 . 12/16/2008
I absolutely love this story. Words would only cheapen how I feel, so I will leave it at that. Thank you for sharing!
nijikitsune chapter 10 . 11/26/2008
dam that was good loved it sequel?
hzl chapter 10 . 10/26/2008
First of all, this is incredibly well-written. It just flows naturally. The characters are well-rounded (and easy to love), the dialogue is believable and the flashbacks are well-placed; it almost sounds like a true story.

There's a line between written porn and graphic literature; this definitely falls into the latter category. Yes, there's a threesome composed of homosexual guys, but it's not just that. There's something behind it - a meaning, a purpose, a message (at least I think so). Not much people pull that off. Especially how oddly realistic it is; it's not just the-greatest-sex-ever but you give it it's faults.

The resolution made me smile. Let's face it - life is not a fairytale. We do not always get the object of our love (or lust) and get to hold hands during the sunset. And although we don't always get the perfect happy ending, we still get a chance for joy.

Overall, it's just brilliant. You're brilliant.
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