Reviews for Out of Luck
the sacred night chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
It's always nice when a story manages to be both funny and hot at the same time. I like it, and I like Alec, the brazen hussy.
Bentastic chapter 10 . 4/13/2007

I was so into it. I cried when i read parts...

Hopefully Alec will eventually get together with Terry, and Denis well ship him over to me! tehee

I honestly think this is one of the best stories written, im such

a pervert lol. Great job, great story.
dro chapter 10 . 4/8/2007
like, woa. i mean, srsly. i like, love you. like like like. srsly.
Pan chapter 10 . 4/5/2007
Christ, this is so screwed up. Loved it.
KitsuneLuvr chapter 10 . 4/2/2007
Omg. He is so fucked up. To go from mental breakdown and healthy acceptance to completely insane denial and dellusion is insane! God, I mean, it's just so sad and pathetic. This is not how I had expected this to end at all. I feel so bad for Alec. It's all just so depressing. I don't know, maybe some people can just move on after this ending, maybe even consider it ok, but it disturbs me. Weird. Just not healthy. Oh well, I guess that's just how it is.
Feel The Waltz chapter 10 . 3/25/2007
*faints due to the awesome-osity of this story*

I've got to hand it to you, this is the best smutty story i've ever read with decent storyline.

Kudos for you!
Fork-In-Your-Eye chapter 10 . 3/22/2007
MAN, YOU HAD WRITTEN ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE EVER READ! Your other stories are great too but i haven finish reading them all. This one is hilarious! I love your ending, well actually the whole storyline. Like Alec will ever learn his lesson. LOL!

Thanks for the story
Navagan chapter 10 . 3/16/2007
Oh my goose!

Heh. You know, I had the most fantastical idea at the end of this. A sort of mind-bound fiction off your fiction as in a mental fan fiction, of sorts. Something along these lines: Wouldn't it be so fucking totally fucking fuckably awesome if Mark showed up...and some sort of old feelings just sorta, KAPOP, came up, or sumptin. Then Terry could get all jealous, and there would be some awesome emotastic backstory for why Mark and Alec split earlier... And then, you know. Man-whore sexiness ensues...

What not, blah, blah... Oh dear.

Such loverly images floating through mine head of heads...


Good dreams for tonight!


Much love for you and your story! [[No, I won't stalk you, calm down.]]


blessed-dragon chapter 10 . 3/3/2007
I found this story while going through xanthofile's favorites because I'm too lame to find good stories by myself. And let me tell you, this story was brilliant. I've been disappointed by slash and recently a lot of the stories just blurred together in my mind. I'd kind of read until the first the characters had sex and get bored. That didn't happen here. I got totally engrossed. So, tons of love for you for not being boring.
Laurena chapter 10 . 3/2/2007
I think you watch too many pornos...that's okay i catch myself every once in a while...but it was cool.
paputsza chapter 10 . 2/25/2007

So i read all of this and nothing happened? Mkay. Nice read.
kawaii-kitsune-thief chapter 10 . 2/19/2007
I'm floored. Absolutely floored. This is wonderful. It's been a long time since I've found something on fictionpress that wasn't the low quality of say, a high school freshman in remedial classes. The voice of the story, the way it was structured, was wonderful. I adored the use of mental games of the characters. Over all it was great and I've added it to my favorite stories list. That said, I'm going to go check out your other stories. Ciao!
Kyle's Precious Little Girl chapter 10 . 2/19/2007
whoa. this story was fucking awesome! i totally love it! :P

keep up the great work.

blast off chapter 10 . 2/13/2007
It's done...

Makes me sad and happy at the same time.

I really adore this story.

Why, I'm not really sure.

Just the way you portrayed the characters, and I especially loved the way you had Alec's train of thought be.

The ending wasn't sad.

It was, but it was happy in this weird... Profound way. :]

But yeah.

I really enjoyed reading it.

This story made my day.

Or... Days, since it took me three days to read it with all the crap in my life right now.

But thank you for the sweet-yet-not-that-sweet-while-still-being-sweet-in-a-sad-kind-of-emotional-way-when-everything-is-all-fucked-up-but-things-are-still-happy-yet-sad scenes that made me smile.


[ a u z]
Half-BloodGrlPirate chapter 10 . 2/12/2007
i loved this i know i say this to a lot of people, but i'm fucking serious this is the most awesome story i have ever read. it was so funny, explicit, and...i don't know. . . realistic! i seriously loved this! you're a fantastic writer. thank you and i hope you have more stories, but if you don't that's okay. Good-bye! - B.J._Half-BloodGrlPirate
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