Reviews for Broken Princess
dream-beautiful chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
This is so lovely.
broken princess in recovery chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
just bored lookin online.. read this song and i have no idea what the site is but it explains my life perfectly. i can relate. i tried to "save" people and ended up becoming exactly what i was trying to fix. i tried to help my ex battle his drug abuse. it ended up like a soap opera. i was left with a beat up car and numerous emotional dilemas. i myself developed severe substance abuse problems. now i have someone trying to save me, and hopefully ill be able to break the cycle...
Freak Of Music chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
I liked This...alot specialy the lyics they rock though there r little spelling mistakes other than that this rocked!
fairies and snapple chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
I did like it. You had a few spelling errors, but other than that it was just really sweet.
somuchformyhappyending chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
okay, so I had to review on this one since I write songs and I'm always interested in other people's song lyrics since I'm SO bad at writing my own. anyways, I really liked this. I liked how it was very meaningful, but really made sense and wasn't really confusing at all. great job! and I love Fleetwood Mac. I hope that you end up writing music for this song and your others. If you haven't written music before then just some advice: when you start out and you totally suck, don't get discouraged. it took my months to come up with something that didn't make me completely sick when playing it. :)
FreakierThanThou chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
Aww. So sweet. I like the dragon analogy you use. Great job.
Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
I did like it. Do you play an instrument? I envy anyone who can hear music in their head and then write lyrics to match it. My son does that. Wonder where he got such amazing talent? Anyhow, good job. By the way, I love your "profile." That is such a lovely, fantastical poem. And of course, I especially love that it has a French title. ) Truly, Tourterelle, relever de deuil
Fida chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Lovely. I don't actually know the tune, but the lyrics are touching and sincere. Almost a play on words at the end: "On your dragon, fly" versus "dragonfly". Very nice