Reviews for I'mLost
DontMakeMeOver chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
I like the repetition of certain phrases.
anovelworld chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
I like this. I feel like I relate. It kinda sucks, to tell the truth.
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
The piece lacks concrete imagery to let the reader know what's going on. The dead-end road and tuneless song metaphors were a bit cliche- add more of a setting and charecerization.