this story is great. keep up the good work and writing.

okay...interesting. update soon. hey and please read the story spell bound it is more supernatural than fantasy but it is a great story.

Wow. Really short. Update soon!

I am really enjoying this story. Update Soon!

This chapter was quite interesting. It seems very cliche though. That's understandable for a person who likes cliche, but I don't like it as much. I will read on!

PS. Please continue to read and review my story.

Humm... Pretty good. It's confusing though. You might have to specify a bit, like who's ruling what country and stuff like that. Keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Could you please review mine?