|Reviews for Broken Continent|
| JB chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Fun story, Zane. Whatever happened to Maiden of Starlight? Don't see it on you page anymore. I e-mailed you with a new version of my prologue. Tell me what you think of it.
| Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
You should separate chapter one from the prologue. I won't read it until you make it another chapter, so I can give it a separate review. I liked the prologue a lot- it is improved much from your earlier writing! Though you're missing a lot of commas. D