Reviews for Voice of an Angel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Though it is kind of rushed, it is a sweet story..Think if you added her background information and how she felt about her mom more that could be more interesting I guess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() John also seems to call her Shell ? |
![]() ![]() Sweet story, though I feel like it could have been better if it was longer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You wrote "I knew him, he went to school with Lucas and I, and he was in my history class." But it should be "Lucas and me." |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww it was so good but short. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again a story on fictionpress makes me stay up until it's time to wake up. Don't get creeper out, it just means I liked it a lot. It was really cute. And you portrayed the mind of a small girl really well. I liked her |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story. Wish it was longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, congrats! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet! Love the characters, the story, and the music that ties it all together. Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story! I know u haven't written in a while, but I still hope u finish this story ;) |
![]() ![]() this is a good story but r u evr going to complete it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey just wundering if you were still writing this story... i still really want to know the out come... well i hope you update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I can't wait to see what happens. Hopefully Michelle ends up with Lucas. No offense to Jason. Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ACK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is not short. You want to see short? Go see my stories. |