|Reviews for Downtown Portrait 206|
| AthenAltena chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
Really powerful mental images here. The disjoined style really helps convey that hopeless feeling.
| TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
If I understand this correctly then I'm a bit sad and creeped out. The descriptions here are very vivid and sharp, and I like it. Great job.