|Reviews for Surrender|
| TheSkyIsGreen chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Ooh, please continue. I know for sure I'm going to be checking back. Extra cookies for a quick update! (Somewhere in the distance, a lie detector goes off.)
Narrator: Aah, bribery of the lowest sort!
| Ellie Nelson chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
All I can really tell from chapter one is that your writing style is clear, nice, and the dialogue doesn't stumble over itself like some other stories here.
Nothing's "wowed" me yet, but the summary really grabbed my attention as a unique plot idea. I'd really like to see this continued.
I think I've only faved one other story before, but I'm faving this - to encourage you, and to keep an eye on it. ;)
| Pixie-Twix chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
O...me likes it! update soon!