|Reviews for your tinsel tinkerbelle|
| Ohio-lovers chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
sexy :) I want to write like this.
| Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
this is amazing.
i love the way he signs her hips with his tongue
its so sensual.
| Wylloa chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
vodka and sex. a classic.
but you make it so much more.
the tone of voice is so complex.
not one word describes it in complete.
loved the second stanza...
| none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
i love the rhythm of the first two stanzas. it fits perfectly with the imagery.
| all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
your writing never ceases to amaze me.
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
this is a very nice poem.
i forget about lipstick.
great job. -ty.
| Definition chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
This will never cease to amaze me. This composition is one of the higher ranked, bittersweet and powerful, short yet meaningful and completely original. Favourited.
| lessons you learn chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
Hi, I'm Erin. Can I be your review whore?
This is...fantastic. Beautiful. Amazing. My favorite part was the second verse. Gorgeous imagery here, darling. I'm going to go read all your other stuff.D *favs*
| ShadesofBlue69 chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
I like this, it's short and nice and I like the imagery that you create.
| TheHangerOfAbhorrantDislike chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Wow...wow. I just really like this one. Very sad...bittersweet...but very good. -TheHangerOfAbhorrantDislike-
| Asagao chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
strawberry arsenic... beautiful!
| lackluster chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
"and that lipstick of hers is vodka flavored,/so kissing her is nothing/but sloppy double shots, like strawberry arsenic/or her hand between her thighs." goodness. you amaze me.
| i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
the top of my mouth is numb,
just a little bit was left,
and ohgod, it makes me feel.
emergency room romance, affirming life with lips, teeth, tongue.
abandoned corners, and scratches from your nails on his back.