Reviews for your tinsel tinkerbelle
Ohio-lovers chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
sexy :) I want to write like this.
Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
this is amazing.

i love the way he signs her hips with his tongue

its so sensual.
Wylloa chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
vodka and sex. a classic.

but you make it so much more.

the tone of voice is so complex.

not one word describes it in complete.

loved the second stanza...
none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
i love the rhythm of the first two stanzas. it fits perfectly with the imagery.

absolutely intoxicating.
all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
your writing never ceases to amaze me.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
this is a very nice poem.

i forget about lipstick.

great job. -ty.
Definition chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
This will never cease to amaze me. This composition is one of the higher ranked, bittersweet and powerful, short yet meaningful and completely original. Favourited.
lessons you learn chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
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Hi, I'm Erin. Can I be your review whore?

This is...fantastic. Beautiful. Amazing. My favorite part was the second verse. Gorgeous imagery here, darling. I'm going to go read all your other stuff.D *favs*
ShadesofBlue69 chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
I like this, it's short and nice and I like the imagery that you create.
TheHangerOfAbhorrantDislike chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Wow...wow. I just really like this one. Very sad...bittersweet...but very good. -TheHangerOfAbhorrantDislike-
Asagao chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
strawberry arsenic... beautiful!
lackluster chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
"and that lipstick of hers is vodka flavored,/so kissing her is nothing/but sloppy double shots, like strawberry arsenic/or her hand between her thighs." goodness. you amaze me.
i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
the top of my mouth is numb,

just a little bit was left,

and ohgod, it makes me feel.

emergency room romance, affirming life with lips, teeth, tongue.

abandoned corners, and scratches from your nails on his back.