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| CorycianAngel1944 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Nice, very original on the pineapple.
| LazyBlueCat chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
(Claps Hands) Bravo! Bravo! That was sure an interesting story. LOVE IT!
| Elber of Torou chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
This is hilarious. As other people have mentioned, this has the potential, I think, to become a more serious work (and by more serious I actually mean less serious, but in a more serious way...um). I mean the jokes are great, the pineapple is a wonderful touch, and I'm a sucker for cast-narrator interaction. But it could easily be polished, given a greater degree of finesse.
But don't get me wrong-for something written by a school-kid, this is really quite sophisticated.
| huimei chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
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| eaststar chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
| struck chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
so it seems a bit I don't know it needs something
the scene doesn't appear to change, you might change that a little like a courtyard where the "sleeping beauty" waves her parents off
narrator seems to be more of a character then a narrator maybe you wanted it that way and make the play more fun?
this is a type of play that I would either turn into a book or rewrite so it's at least five pages long
so pretty good it end
| Sir Pebbles chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Haha. Nice. I like the prince feller. Heheh.
| SingLikeNo1IsListening chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
aww, lol. That was very cute lol. I may just have to put it on with my siblings lol. (I'll be the queen of course) ] Very good for a little kid.
| Hed in the Cloudz chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
This is funny! I was a bit nervous when I read that you had written this in elementary school, but I figured that if you saw fit to put it up here it must be okay, and I was right! The character descriptions are hilarious, and you've certainly captured the randomness of the original! :) The lines are a bit cheesy, and the lines of repeated letters to indicate drawn out lines are only slightly (all right, incredibly) annoying, but for something written in elementary school, as I said before, this is great!
-Yna, from the Review Marathon- see the link in my profile!
| Freddy chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
A-Maze-Ing! Haha! I've never laughed so hard at a parody of a famous play-turned-Disney-Film written by a kindergardener and posted some 10 years later! Wonderful job!
You should submit more works! The masses demand it. DEMAND IT I SAY!
| LongLiveTheCarCrashHearts chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
| emily chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
omg that was so good i lovw to right stories u are so good i want to be good like you
| MusicalLova59 chapter 1 . 12/29/2006
Well this amused me. It was cute, and though it wasn't exactly the funniest take off of sleeping beauty, I enjoyed it. I can totally see this being halarious if the correct direction was done. I think you'd appreciate my short scene, which is a take-off of peter pan. This reminds me of mine, but it's a little more G-rated.
| Kohlomere chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
Pineapple? Unorthodox (hm...perhaps that was the author's intention) and truly precious. Merry Christmas, E.
| Britney chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
that SP was actually kinda funny lol...yo were good for a person who wrote it in kindagarden