Reviews for Great Things Come In Packages, Even Boyfriends |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Did you take this idea from Absolute Boyfriend? You should really give some credit to Yuu Watase... |
![]() ![]() ![]() BEST STORY EVA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it it was really cool still can't believe she went out eiv nathan... P |
![]() ![]() ![]() A little different but I still enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you take this from, Absolute Boyfriend? Or is it ur twist you should put a disclaimer on this before ppl start calling u out and u get in trouble |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story, but i think it needs a major edit. there are quite a few plot holes and the story doesn't always flow or make any sense. it is very promising, but I think it could be a lot better with just a little editing. look forward to reading more from you in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending. It made me smile. I'm glad there was a happy ending. The title/last line is kind of funny. Nice work. Good luck with your next story. ~Twilight Starr |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an interesting chapter. Nathan was mean to her. I wonder what that phone call was about-if it was just him talking to a friend or something worse. I hope Lucas comes back. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor girl. She really misses him. The interaction between her and Nathan was interesting. Nice work. I shall continue reading. ~Twilight Starr |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG! AMAZING STORY! i loved it so so much! a MUST-READ story!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um, did you take this from, Absolute Boyfriend? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this was a really awesome story! It was so much fun to read! But some of the stories the characters told about things that happened confused me. Like the whole money thing? Why was Nathan asking for money? Idk, it just confused me. But the story was so amazing! It was funny, too! ] And I loved the ending! ] Read my story? Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() isnt this just the same as absolute boyfriend ? you should at least give some credit to yuu watase |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dudee... is this idea based off of the manga/anime/drama Absolute Boyfriend? Interesting beginning though. -chewyy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHMYGOSH I LOVED THIS STORY! Very bittersweet :D But to tell you the truth, those chapters without Lucas was booringg. hehe he's so freaking cute! *drools* PLEASE AN EPILOGUE! I thoroughly enjoyed this story. A great start to the day :D LOVESS, SP |