Reviews for Secret Admirer
LittleDoe chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
That's really funy... almost made me laugh out loud. I like how you wrote this. Well done.

God bless you.

Rachelle Spirit Boyens chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
Funny analogy. I don't think the eggs were introduced well, but in the end I liked it. I especially liked the "like I'm teasing him". Kind of funny, but I think you could have elaborated on it more... Anyways, nice poem!
Celestis chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
HEHEHEHEH...You had me laughing! That's so cool. *Whacks dead 'Secret Admirer' with telephone pole just for good measure* Who needs him anyways? ;) I love this! Keep up the good work!
Captain Lucky chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
Umm, you both seem clueless. Ha, ha, ha, but seriously, it's refreshing to find someone with a good sense of humor. This was very clever!

Rainy Tuesdays chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
This was really clever...and funny. I especially loved the lines in which she tries to look up "Secret Admirer" and "My Lover" and how she can't find him and believes he has died. I know the feeling.