Hello dear! You'll never guess who I am! lol It should be prety easy. :D

Anyway, it was beautiful, even though I already told you so. It is very cool, and I love the repition and contradictories. They really make it flow very well!

Love you lots! (And you should know who I am by now hun. :})

It's like a came to the edge of a cliff, and fell into your words. Very deep. I love the way you play off your own words.

"You see me as I am,

But I see you on the inside."

"You don’t see me as I am,

But I see your deepest emotions."

You say the opposite of what you just said before. Great form. You keep with the rythm, and I could read it, and it pretty much flowed. A few ruff points, but your getting there. Great work!