Reviews for McDeath
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
[say hi to the 16-year-old fastfood slave:

“Scuse me, I'll have chicken mcnuggets and a big mac

with a side order of heart disease.

Oh, and fries.”] - I've read so many poems like this and, not saying this isn't amazing, because it is, but this was just the most perfect line to ever grace the topic and, damn, you touched it so well and, oh-

I love your style when it comes down to this poem.

It is amaing, honestly.

- Noelle
Noah The Digital Dragon chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Interesting and very well expressed. This is a very powerful poem. I especially like the title.
LovetheMadness chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
very nicely put...and undeniably truthful. society's own self destruction and resurrection.
ChildeOfChaos chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Very interesting, love the title and the lines

"say hi to the 16-year-old fastfood slave:

“Scuse me, I'll have chicken mcnuggets and a big mac

with a side order of heart disease."