|Reviews for East of Eden|
| Written chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
hi! I just wanted to say that I actually truly absolutely loved this piece. I actually took a second to read it out loud, if you can believe it. I like the way the words settle, but I don't know if that makes any sense or what. sometimes you just like something, you know?
my favorite part is the very end. it's like a feeling that's familiar, but different at the same time because of the way you present it. I'm not sure what you had in mind, but in my mind's eye, I see someone who feels a little lost with where they are in life. or something.
nice work :)