At first I thought Adrian was bit nice. Nicer than most. But everyone knows a guy will act to get some. I still think he's the nicest out of all men so far.

And to think that I thought the general was a bit nicer. How much more wrong can I be? What is the time period or estimated time period?

Okay, so I'm changing my opinion quickly. I'm still revolted at the idea of slaves, but I like the idea of the story so I'm going to keep reading. I thought the General was nice compared to other soldiers, wrong.

I've got to say, I had my doubts because I don't really like slave based stories. This one though, has changed my mind. Normally, I would find it awful to read, but not so.

it was really really good please keep updating

i enjoyed this story...though it doesn't look like there will be any updates anytime soon. i hope you can finish this one day. it has been an interesting read. thanks for sharing.

What no more? I was getting into this story although I'm a bit upset with how she's changed character even though I totally understand why. I hope you continue.

I wish you would finish this its so wonderful

this is a very great and wonderful good story that i love and like a lot since i first started reading it and its really good to read too! your a wonderful good great awesome author who wrote this very great wonderful good story!

That SOB!

Handsome or not, rape is still rape.

If he were old and pot-bellied, will Kylie fall in love with Adrian like I presume she will, later on?

I doubt it.

You write well anyways.

I know you have not updated for over a year but I'm hoping really hoping you will update soon because I would really love to see what happens next. Please update soon :)

HaTeFuL LoViNg

Ugh, I can't read this anymore. I hate the stupid wh ore Kylie turned into to.

It's sickening.

Sounds so col

"An orange snow storm on her lap,"

Ha, ha, I love the way you write.

It's very...uniquely descriptive.

Great job -

I really really enjoyed this story. Your characters are smart, sharp and multi-dimensional. The plot is very interesting and a bit unconventional, in the way the characters react to their situations.

I hope you eventually come back and finish it!