|Reviews for You|
| blueroseofice chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
I like how you tell a story without getting caught up in fancy words of rhyme schemes. Also the feeling behind this is REAL. I hate it when people try to write an emotion they don't understand or have clearly never felt. Keep it up!
| commemorativemisery chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
this one reminds me of my mom. and my family in general, but mostly my mom.
nicely done! very precise, clean and to the point if you ask me.
| polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
-pokes- lmfao you emo xD
anyway, i love he last two lines..they ring on very nicely, & the repition in lines "it's all because of you/all of you/because of you" is nice. ~Bex xx
| Ryumaru shogunate chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
WOW! EMO! SUWEET! Keep up the good work!
| braindead1345 chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
OMG! the last line just lingers...kinda ironic,no? "i didnt quit because of you, I gave up because of me" deep,man...
| Aloharocker chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
i can definitely connect with this poem. i like your line breaks, they work really well.
| Felicia Danielle chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
I enjoyed this, being able to relate a bit to myself and all. Nicely written. Cheer up :]