|Reviews for love|
| Full Stop chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
o. Thats really really cool. Utterly adore the last sentance.
| Starving Artist chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
To me, this poem says "don't eat candy".
Sugar-turned-blade...hmm. I like that, yet it makes me sad to think about.
"It's comfort, it's solitude"...I like that too. Very few will actually get the meaning of this, I think. Or at least understand to the degree in which you mean.
This is the style I like. Although, still, never happy, never loving...and yet both.
| in a jar pk chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
i've really missed reading your work!
i love this. as always. x
| lackluster chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
the first few lines are obviously the best. ive got to say i loved the whole thing, though.
it's like a taboo. gotta have it.
| bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 1/1/2007
Wonderfully written, I love the painfully vivid first few lines. Amazing images here, I really like this piece a lot. Great work and keep writing.
| x account closed x chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
it was sweet really,
in that tragic sort of way that we all hate(to admit we love)
the metaphors were beautiful
and i don't think i've ever seen words dance quite like this.
(truth or dare: doubles were always my first choice)
| Countess Chocula chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
The first few lines are my favorite. You never fail to come up with a simply amazing poem. Honestly, this is just amazing.
| Evil Zipper chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
only a T rating? try M!
it reads really well, and i enjoyed the last two lines...
but it's rather... risque...