Reviews for Letting Go
Booklover91 chapter 20 . 11/18/2008
aw, how sweet. aw :D

I have the biggest grin on my face, lol. i loved this story. ]
Booklover91 chapter 14 . 11/18/2008
so i've been a very slack reader, and i haven't reviewed yet, but i'm letting you know right now that this story is GREAT. i love it. and Candace and stephen are so cute together, aw. And this is going on my favs ]
mekaky chapter 20 . 10/29/2008
awesome story, love it :)
Divisionred chapter 20 . 9/13/2008
THis was a great story. Thanks
AMM3485 chapter 20 . 8/30/2008
Awesome story. I loved it. The characters were amazing and the plot was gripping.
dreamwriter33 chapter 20 . 6/8/2008
I loved this story. Stayed up all night to read. I have fallen in love with Stephen and Candace.
johnandvan chapter 20 . 9/6/2007
Just finished reading it. The story was wonderful. The characters so real, and the love story just romantic and I so enjoyed. JV
Areya Branxton-Chase chapter 20 . 6/27/2007
This was excellent through and through. A truly outstanding piece and I am impressed.

A. Toneya Fountain
Areya Branxton-Chase chapter 17 . 6/27/2007
I'm not mad at this chapter at all. I understand completely and he's a moron for thinking that she was anything but true to him, but that's men for ya.

A. Toneya
Areya Branxton-Chase chapter 15 . 6/27/2007
I can't believe he broke up with her. If anything he needs her there to be storng and well he needs to just stop acting like a man I swear before God they can be some stubborn, irrational creatures!

A. Toneya Fountain
Areya Branxton-Chase chapter 13 . 6/27/2007
I can't get over how eloquent this is written. I hope this is the piece you're going to publish and it goes well, i would definitely buy a copy.

A. Toneya
Areya Branxton-Chase chapter 11 . 6/27/2007
Damon is a bastard and Olivia is a bitch! Now that that part of my rant is over I'll apologize because that wasn't very pleasant. Poor Candace, it seems like just when she starts to get a little confidence about herself someone or something stands in her way, mainly herself but that's a different story. This is so eloquently written until I don't know how else to describe it. Very cool indeed

A. Toneya
jammi chapter 2 . 4/15/2007
hi, well on your page you said you encourage constructive criticism so that's what I'm going to give.

First is your transition from her POV to Stephen's. On one hand it's not abrupt but on the other it is, you know what I mean? You write it so we know exactly who's POV we're reading from but at the same time since we're not expecting a view shift it's pretty abrupt. I paused when Stephen said he woke from an eoritc dream and had to go back and read that last paragraph again. Maybe if you do page breaks or - so we know we're getting something that doesn't related to the previous section?

I like the way you describe people, well the way you made Stephen describe Candace, because he doesn't seem to have realised her colour, like he has but it's all good and she sounds absolutely gorgeous without being unnatural, you get what I mean? All her features are 'ordinary' but the way he thinks on them she's beautiful. If she had described herself she would've either played down her features or came off sounding porn-starrish and conceited.

I probably won't continue reading this because Damon is already getting on my nerves, I know it's a case of the reader knowing something's wrong before the character and Candace is reacting the way someone going through it does but she seems naive over him. I'm only at chapter two and I see so many warning signs about Damien and the fact that she doesn't is frustrating.

Also the way she acted when she first saw Stephen. I admit her wish to avoid the situation is understandable, I mean, it would be embarrasing but at the same time it's like she's making a huge highschool production out of it and it counteracts the maturity she's shown before.

You do seem to have a good grasp on your characters however and nice touch making him have a daughter. So far you have strong characters, a strong story line and know what you want to do with it.
AgileWriter chapter 20 . 4/3/2007
What a beautiful ending! I loved this story and all of your stories, actually. Amazing job!
BettyBoo chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Yay! They made it back together in the end! _

Thank you for writing and sharing such great story - I do hope you return(!) and give us more!

take care, bye!
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