Reviews for Year of the Rabbit |
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Jaded Romance chapter 24 . 11/19/2007 oh man!SHE does love him right! YES! We all know she does! lol so she better tell him...but AW...I can't believe that was Rhode's other fear! That is so cute,especially how he said it! please update FAST! |
Sure as the Dawn chapter 24 . 11/19/2007 OH! I get it now! Man, I really can't wait 'till the 'sadness' ends. I want every body to be happy!...yeah...that was weird. |
Carlotta Lynn chapter 24 . 11/19/2007 aw... they make me sad those two. They never seem like get any happiness. I'm excited that you said the sadness ends soon... I think I might be getting depressed. lol. Can't wait for more! |
Unsociably Acceptable chapter 24 . 11/19/2007 aw...its like no one is writing enough in chappies anymore!...eh, ah well... |
Loriency chapter 24 . 11/19/2007 hey, you have a bit of at typo near the top of the chapter. Reval killed Cupidity just to piss Reval off. should be "just to piss Rhode off" i think. Honestly...I'm usually pretty convinced by now that one of the characters should love the other, but...I'm kinda with Sophie right now. Why should she love him? I don't know how to put it. it just..doesn't sound right yet. They don't act like they're in love. Simply in lust/infatuation. Ok, i'm going to stop analyzing fictional characters' lovelives now. Update soon please! PS: I love Cupid. I was homeschooled, and it's only sometimes true. There are definitely hot homeschoolers. But then there are the homeschooled homeschoolers. Who wear suspenders and thick glasses and socks up to their knees and...they're worse than geeks and dweebs. Sick... |
Adurna chapter 24 . 11/19/2007 I can't believe she didn't say she loved him back! She hurt poor little Rhode's feelings. :( I noticed a typo. When Sophie's talking to Cupid you said "Reval killed Cupidity just to piss Reval off." instead of "Reval killed Cupidity just to piss Rhode off." |
Venus Smurf1 chapter 23 . 11/17/2007 Aw, I was so sad about the bit with Lucas! He completely creeps me out, but I feel bad for Sophie. I must compliment you on your writing skills, though. I love reading, but it's hard for me to respond to characters sometimes, and yet I always do to yours. A mark of your talent, author dear. And the whole this with Cupidity? I think I'm gonna have nightmares. Well done on that, too, though I'm shivering. |
25ariel25 chapter 23 . 11/15/2007 wow. disturbing. but good |
damnfancyscotch chapter 23 . 11/14/2007 ah! madness! so delighted to be back reading this. i was quite behind... erg. wonderful, nonetheless. *kiss* |
Loriency chapter 23 . 11/14/2007 lol, i love the titles of your chapters. they're fantastic. so...it's getting interesting. Again. I love how you give the reader a bit of information, a bit of a fight, a bit of a climax, and then things settle down again, and then you do it again, but then settle down, and then FINALLY! one day, you're going to do a full blown climax, and the story is going to come to an end! is it just me, or does climax sound extremely perverted in this review? i swear it's not intentional, lol. sorry. Please update soon! it's still quite good! |
moneymakestheworldgoround chapter 6 . 11/14/2007 :) this is CUTE. :) |
Queenjewel44 chapter 23 . 11/12/2007 this is a great story. i am happy that they are kissing finally. |
Undecided.And.Confused chapter 23 . 11/12/2007 Oh, I forget who Cupidity is...Cupids girlfriend? How sad! The cheerful humor is being blackened with all the decapitating! This isn't even listed as a horror story..yet? Poor Lucas, he's turning into a bad guy. Was that last joke part supposed to be clear? |
Lyss chapter 23 . 11/11/2007 Ohoh, it's going to be a SAD day without Cupid. Single's Awareness Day that is... |
into the black chapter 23 . 11/11/2007 YUSIR another work of Hate to Hope/bleedingair following the morbid mutilation of bodies in some sort. But still...I love Reval. I'm thinking you should do something more to change my mind. |