New story and it sounds awesome. Your MC is silly, random, and optimistic. The Easter Bunny idea into a boy. Oh, I can see predictions forming already. He sounds so protective and isolated since he didn't really make good convo. Very funny. Cant wait for more.

its.. confusing.

but cool! haha easter bunny!

Oh, joyjoyjoy! A new story! I sometimes can't believe the things you come up with. The Easter Bunny? In boy form? I love it! So strange, so very strange, but I love it.

I like how said Easter Bunny seems to be socially inept. Hahah. You'd think he would be, what with being a bunny and probably not having that much human contact, on top of it all.

One thing I really like about your writing is that your protagonists are so different from one another. This one vaguely reminds me of Kaela from Resistance...with her like, randomness or something. That was your lightest story other than this (or at least it started out that way haha) so maybe that's what does it. Don't know. I might be on cocaine, that could explain it.

Anyway I'm really excited to get into this! The only crit I have is that..there isn't more? Haha. Also that this chapter was a teeny bit slow but you know, first chapters are usually like that so don't even pay attention to that! Are you still reading this after I told you not to pay attention? WHY? Still? STILL? You're wretched at following orders.

Er, right...anyway! Can't wait to see more! -fav's this so fast- I'm excited!

xtotallyatpeacex: I guarantee they wouldn't have a single review aside from the typical "Get a life, loser!"

au contraire, xtotallyatpeacex;

GET A LIFE, KELLI.

-laughs her incredible clevernes.

pee es. i was being nosy.

i read your reviews.

-is not sorry.

-is not sorry at all.

interesting! )

I like this- as well as your other stories. I would like to see this one continue- I don't think I've ever seen the Easter Bunny portrayed in such a manner! :D

-Izzy

SHE BROKE HIS EG.

she broke their lohv babyy.

how awful.

how sad.

poor easterboy

POOR EGG.

-laughs someones expense.

you're insane, lohvah. you know that right. right. righto? DOLLOP. wtfack. -smack. where did you find that word. DOLLOP. HAHAHAHAHAHA. ur so funny kels. kels. how chummy are we. how. howw.

marc is pretty much a nerdifiedd version of you. obviously you like using repulsively intelligent words to seem smarter than the rest of us. and obviously marc is you. i hope marc is supaflyy but that was kind of mean of him when he didnt help her.

SHE BROKE HIS EG.

HAHAHAAHHAA

poor easter chick.

poor chick.

-gives easter boy lohv.

i hope you have some magiks&tricks up yo sleeve woman. this story is al trickayy i cant figure it out.

luck be with you.

godspeed.

GODSPEED, KELS. GODSPEED.

(oh what the shizzle. i didn't realize e-hearts didn't work on fp-comments. bah!

&i also didn't realize that fp had a restriction for commenters either. only one comment per chapter? ohhellzno.

lucky for me i have a back-up when this happens! ohsheeyes. hoekay, copypasta time!)

YAY YAY EASTER BUNNIES FOR THE WIN!

okay first impressions/commentary of this story:

- i really like how bouncy topsy turvy this story is - especially how it's in the perception of an "average girl." she doesn't sound "average", if at all, and i find it a bit 'interesting' (for lack of better word - oh wait, no, i'm just too lazy to look into google/mister thesaurus for better fluffy words). maybe that's exaggeration&sarcasm kicking in her organs but i'm not quite sure.

- marcus sounds so educated, and by that i mean, educated by the thesaurus. :D his gloomy slouchy attitude makes me feel sad sometimes though - it's like looking at those loner's at a traditional high school in the far back row, sleep deprived and slouchy. oh ho, characterization! i literally glared when he wouldn't help her up after that crazy egg smash of a fiasco. so much for consideration! aw.

- "HOE MY GAWD FAKE RABBIT EARS BOY WITH PINK EYES WTF" thought quoted for emphasis. strangely enough, that almost sounded albino and attractive at the same time. randumb crazy imaginaries.

- oh what. WHAT? WHAT WHAT. ASDFGHJK THE HELL (?). okay, bunny guy with pink eyes scare me now. i mean, dude. the egg. he's going crazy over an egg and it's like WTF JUST HAPPENED? man i love those kind of siutations. you do one tiny simple mistake and POW! right in the kisser. or better yet, right in the eye. like oh shee - REACTION! &then it seems like nothing happend. why hello there weirdness.

&to sum it up: i like it. i really do! so please continue-continue-continue so that my organs can be selfishly satisfied by the crazy fuck-up read-candy that you speak of. ohgoshyes.

ps: just so you know, i've read almost every story you've submitted on fp (including poetry!). i have yet to read the whole lot on both accounts! yesyesyes. (because it's that god) although i didn't have the time to review any of your works & that made me feel a little sadfaced and decided to review this story while i have the chance to! :)

pps: out of pure curiosity - is the potpourri story mail list thing still going on? i would like to read it too (when it's finished, someday)! (email is saucegay gmail dot com ) :D

YAY YAY EASTER BUNNIES FOR THE WIN!

what an INTERESTING first chapter. I have no clue where this is going but I like! )

I like it so far. I can't wait until the next chap.

Wow, this story looks really interesting! It's also quite humorous. Marc actually reminds me of a guy in my English class. Anyway, hope you update soon!

Ha, I really like this a lot :] It made me smile - well, more like grin ear to ear. I love finding weird little stories like this to brighten my day (night.)

It was random and weird and quirky and is there more? If there is, that's be brilleant :D

Anyway, sorry about my sodding attempt at a review, Im just not that great at them. But, keep writing :]

amy x

hehehe! continue continue~!

O. I met the Easter Bunny once. *nuds* Yup, I did, plus I snapped a snazzy photo of him. He wasn't quite so egg-philic though.

Just a question, what are these people's names besides Marcus?

Knowing you, you'll probably give him two names like you do in all your other stories. You tend to lean towards L's also for male names. Lure, Lynx, Lost. Maybe, you'll use the name Lyric next, but who knows.

I'm fucked up in the head, but I think you outstretch me by far. Although, when my teacher was labeling us since it was finals and our last day there, he called me the meanest girl he ever met. I think it was because I was constantly making other people mad because I'm horribly blunt, ah well. Anyway, damn tangents.

I liked your story, never thought you'd write about the Easter Bunny when you advertised it in your bio. I liked the main character's reaction when she received the egg, and the Easter Bunny kicked the crap out of her. Always fun.

Just a question, was he harrassing that poor lady? I mean he must have done something pretty bad to get THE Frying Pan. Also, I'm assuming his ears are real, not at all blessed with metal wires.

Anywho, I'd write more and probably annoy you to no end, but I have icky finals to deal with. I'd say update soon, but I'll change it around. Update whenever the hell you want. Tschüs