So um, does Sophie ever find out WHY he nuzzles her cheek? Or that he keeps marking her as his territory. Her reaction would be funny. . .

One chapter left? :( But last chapter you said there were three left so shouldn't there be two left? You're really rushing things aren't ya?

I think I'm actually going to cry when this one's over. It's so good! .

KAH! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ONE! JUST AS MUCH AS THE CONTRACT, SHE'S ACTUALLY WITH THE GUY I LIKE! XD RHODE IS JUST TOO ADORABLE FOR WORDS THOUGH HIS CHARACTER HAS CHANGED A LOT THROUGHOUT THE CHAPTERS, NICE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. THERE ARE TYPO'S AND SUCH HERE AND THERE, BUT I WAS SO ABSORBED INTO READING IT THAT I DIDN'T EVEN CARE!

OH BUT ONE THAT I REMEMBER, I FORGOT MOST, KINDA JUST PASSED THEM BY, WELL, AFTER CUPIDITY OR WHATEVER DIED, AND YOU PUT SOMETHING LIKE

Reval had done it to piss Reval off.

Yeah, you meant Rhode right? It's in the chapter right after the 'joke' .~

This is really cute! I LOVE IT! Ah, I bet he's going to jump her when she says the oh so magical words! And he's so bouncy! O.o Fun, fun! lol!

Update soon!

plz update the last chapter. its is easter so at least end the story on the day the story sets.

whaT HAPPENED TO THIS CHAPTER.

Wow, i haven't been on in soo long. And i just got to reading this chapter. Its good :P and cute :)can't wait for the last one!

omfg. can't believe you're about to finish this. and then finish seizing the sky. and then you'll go poof forever. yeah. exaggerating a bit.

quick review since my mom is being anal and going "who are you talking to? why are you laughing?" she thinks your story is a boy. wonderful huh?

and i didn't get the whole ice cream bit, but i'll go find the thing with lucas later :]

“You people make me want to lay my face against a burner.”- i fucking love cupid.

and aww... rhode and sophie are slowly getting there, but it would have been hella funny to have cupid actually stab sophie... just to see what would happen; goo's a cutie and lee's less of a jerk but still a jerk. i think that's a good thing

i'm never going to think of easter day the same way ever again.

can't wait for the chapter. bet reval will start wrecking havok again. and then the whole gang (haha.. "whole gang" reminds me of scooby doo) will have to figure out how to deal with him. and i'm VERY curious to see how you will be ending this story.. it's one of those stories that is going to have that satisfyingly weird ending? probably

:]

God this story is so good. It's cute, original and really funny, not forced funny which is a large plus. I've read it 2 times because I was so ansy waiting for the friggen last chapter. I can't wait till you update. It's just so good. Even if I have to wait a month or 2 months for a chapter. It's so totally worth it. :)

Oh my gosh, this is such a good novella (I just like the look of that word). Thank you for updating!

love it update soon

Wow. Your story is interesting! One of the girls in my writing group from my creative writing class recommended your story and she was totally right. You have a unique way of describing events and gestures that I've honestly never read before.

Update soon!

This chapter makes me smile every time. Speaking of which I forget how many times I read this darned thing.

This chapter was utterly cute.

So next chapter is it? The big showdown? Wow, it's all so sudden . . .

“That’s a negative attitude, Rhode. You’re supposed to threaten him into doing it.”

Best line.

Livi

? i don't remember when sophie got ice cream with lucas... *sob* what chapter was that?

thiss story is amazing

ima have a bunny named Mr. Winkless when i get older, he's gonna have floppy ears and beigishh skin... but now ima get two New Zealand watchamecallit bunnies named Reval and Rhode. ]

update soon soon soon!