Reviews for disorderly
kelsi bones chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
"Amd laughter.../Laughter is just do tempting." I'll be honest, I don't get this line at all. Kind of funny thats it's my favorite one.

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Kaitlyn chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
woah. very cool...

i was really satisfied (if that makes sense) with the ending...it left me thinking...but yeah...love it :)
contrast and friction chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
You have an intense and unique style of writing. I loved the inventive images and phrases you used & I loved the narrative like progression in this, and how the images developed before exploding beautifully at the end. The tie in to the title was perfect.
Alyssa's Attic chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
Intense- I loved it and thanks for the review - Alyssa