Reviews for Nightime
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Hopeful! It is excellenty, I love it.

My only suggestion is that perhaps you could do something to the last four lines to show that they are in response to the earlier ones... Perhaps a space or italics or the like... Just an idea.

Ashelin chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
I'm going to review this in two ways. Literal and metaphorical. Let's start with literal. I personally love night, and stars. For me it is energizing. I abosolutely love the rain too, and I'm not too fond of the sun. I know, I'm a total weirdo. It is cool to see how some people love it though. Now for metophorical. It seems like you are going through a tough time right now. Maybe you aren't, but this poem kind of displays that. I love the ending because it gives hope to it all. Great job.