|Reviews for i wanna be scene a few verses|
| she smolders chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
This piece is all about contradictions, I love it. This girl (you?) is a little strong and weak at the same time. At first I took it in a more humorous way but as I continued reading, I realized how deep it really is.
I also like how real she sounds - this could my friend, or my neighbour, or my sister, or maybe me. We have all wanted something similar to at least one of these lines.
Some of my favourite phrases included: "ego flairs on my ankles", "gloss my lips and sparkle my hips", and "lithely lethal".
Oh and this line just about broke my heart: " i’m cute, i swear it. i’m an adorable cunt and i’m a unicorn and i’m differently, uniquely the same as you." Sometimes I think we're only convincing ourselves.
Take care, this is just amazing.
| in a jar pk chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
ahaha i love this!
and i think i may be a hypocrite for saying so lol. x
| hey maria chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
I thought this would be funny but it wasn't. It was good though - it romanticizes the already somewhat romantic idea of...scene-ness, and it did it in an honest, pretty way too.
All right, I lied. It was a little funny. "i wanna take pictures of myself and put them on myspace and get a million and three and a half comments from strangers telling me that i’m their new inspiration and masturbation material." made me giggle.
| kit feral chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
I was trying to think of one great word to start this off with that would show how much I love this and still make me sound cool... and all I could come up with was some sort of "wowza" noice. Which makes me sound like a dork and still doesn't show how amazing this is.
At first, I thought it was just going to be funny. Which, in some parts, like the masturbation material line, it was. But it was also pretty damn deep in some places and actually inspiring, too.
It also had this fantastic sense of reality. "i wanna talk until one in the morning about the kid i’m flirting with at the lunch table" for example. That really brought it all down to earth and put it in perspective.
I had a lot of favorite lines from this. "i wanna be bigger than jesus", of course. "i wanna gloss my lips and sparkle my hips" was also delicious. The image of "sparkling hips" really got to me. "i’m little and young and lithely lethal and you want so badly to mess with me" was one of the best. "Lithely lethal" has great alliteration.
But the best line was without a doubt: "i wanna be free, i want you to want to tie me down." Fan-fucking-tastic.
This is going right on my favorites.
| LovetheMadness chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
absolutely amazing like crazy, fucking loved it. awesome, inspiring...loved it.